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Thanks for the review! I'll consider your ideas when I edit this. (: Thanks!

Aaaand this months favorite character: Doctor Mycroft Kendal. XD You write with such an amazing voice and I love it. This is awesome. When you finish your novel and publish ...

Thank you so much! XD Thanks for pointing out lack of 'for' in 'slowly she reached for the switch on the wall'. I will fix that. The 'three times' thing ...

Oh, thank you so much! Yeah, I tried to write it in a way that could be interpreted a bunch of ways and I like how you really did that! ...

Thanks for reviewing it! I'm glad you liked it.

Thanks for the feedback! Yeah, I'll definitely look into your suggestions. Thanks!

XD It's okay! And thanks for the review. I'm glad you liked it. Yeah, that bit is a bit weird, so I may change it. Again, thanks!

Well, thank you! Yes, I will look into the intro. Thanks for the review!

Thank you so much! Yeah, this is really helpful. The 'what of reality' part was supposed to be 'what is reality', but I thought it sounded better with 'of', and, ...

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.

Thanks! I haven't actually thought of it that way. I was thinking more of the world as the object and the people holding it having the opportunity and power as ...

Thank you! I actually like the way I worded that, so I think I'll leave it like that, but thank you for the suggestion! Thanks for taking the time to ...

Thanks!

XD Thanks for the suggestion and the review! I'm glad you liked it. XD You have a great day/night, too!

Hey, thanks! I'm glad you liked it!