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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Count On Me.

    Herb, the more I read your works, the better I like you! I think this one tied for first place in my favorite literature's with your poem, words. This is ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Other » General, Dramatic Re: words

    Herb, this is by far your best work that I have read so far. It is the perfect length, not too long, not too short, and has meaning. You come ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Inside of You

    Herb, here I am on my second review of the day! First things first, this is a little short. Don't get me wrong, I'm fine with short poems, just you ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Ah ha ha I don't care

    Dude, Herb, this is great. And actually knowing you, this is exactly what you do! You do all of this, which really makes me happy to know that some people ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Fanfiction, Romantic Re: His Tears Cost 1M$

    I love this. You express your feelings very well, and it feels written from the heart. I love how you tell us, the readers, how special he is to you ...

    Dec 22, 2013
  • Other » Humor, Other Re: How To Sneak Into Your Room Late at Night

    Ok, dude, this is plain mastery. You must have brilliant talent, considering you're on the front page and have only been on a couple days! Good job! *Applause and more ...

    Dec 7, 2013
  • Poetry » Literature, Dramatic Re: The MASTER Piece

    This is an interesting poem, though I must admit, I do not understand it. This confused me quite a bit, but maybe I am reading it wrong. The textured idea ...

    Dec 7, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Speech of the Unspoken

    This is amazing. I cannot very well find anything to critisize or suggest because this is so beautiful. Or amazing. Whichever you prefer. I especially like the ending where you ...

    Dec 6, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Wedding bells

    This is a pretty piece of poetry, though it feels more like a bit of short story rather than poetry, but I like it. 'Tis very romantic. The custom here ...

    Dec 5, 2013
  • Short Story » Romantic, Romantic Re: The Forgotten Smile

    This piece is lovely. Very romantic and desperate. I like how you had the flashback in the middle in a different font, that makes it easier to tell the mood ...

    Nov 30, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: These are the Children

    I really love this poem. You touch down on many poor children forgotten until now. There seems to be many more of them now so I'm glad you recognize them. ...

    Sep 29, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: The Pack - Prologue

    This is AWESOME!!! I can't wait to read the novel part! This is a very interesting prologue. Someone dies, by means of mysterious man. Wonderful. I love the way you ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Farewell, my Knight

    This is beautiful, and I really love it. So, the way this review is going to work is, I'm going to list the things I really like, what needed work ...

    Aug 18, 2013
  • Short Story » Realistic, Humor Re: Anecdote Worthy Travels

    This was a good idea and you executed it fairly well. The problem I have with this piece is it moves too fast. It's basically called "Going to Disney" and ...

    Aug 16, 2013
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: A Moment's Greatness

    Thank you for writing this. Really, thank you. You have touched my heart so incredibly and inspired me greatly. Your writing is so fluent and beautifully described that I feel ...

    Aug 15, 2013


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