rachellecarter

This was a good story. I think it could use a little more work though. There are a few things that actually confused me. Maybe you could explain them. He ...

I think this poem is fine. I don't really like poems without patterns but that's just me being OCD. It is cute, although I can't figure out the intent of ...

You did a great job making your reader visualize the beach and summer time. I enjoyed that very much. I think that it couldn't hurt to add in a few ...

First off, good job. This captures what it really means to be in a hurry. I could actually feel it! The one thing I can't distinguish is the rhyme scheme. ...

That was precious! I do believe that you have captured the complete essence of having a crush of a first love. I was impressed by how well written this is. ...

Hey! I thought you could use a review on this! I thought that it was adorable! It was so short and sweet, there was nothing negative about it! I agree ...