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Hi Mailice! Time to review part 4! (Also I admire your style so much! The way you write this is like a combination of a novel and movie, where a ...

Hi there! Like a dying sun Sharing it's rays of light I love this imagery! At first I thought you were talking about a dead sun and how we would ...

Hello again! I have a lot to say, so I'm just going to dive right in! :) The town hall of Sehlingen was pompous, not modest, but represented the immediate ...

Hi there! Just stopping by for one last review! I love your story idea(I haven’t looked at the other chapters yet) and the plot and action are perfectly spaced out ...

Hello there! I'm really glad I clicked on this story; your characterization and scene writing is beautifully done, and I can tell you really enjoyed writing this! Spraying and splashing ...

Hello and Happy Review Day to both of you! I really liked the optimistic turn in the poem(what can I say I'm a sucker for happy endings ;)) and you ...

Hello and Happy Review Day! I don't have tons of experience writing novels, but I do have experience reading them, so if anything's a little unclear just let me know ...

I'm back!(P.S. thanks for the follow :)) I'm really enjoying the characters in this story so far! Léonard was such a surprise and his personality is so funny: For a ...

Hi MailicedeNamedy! I was instantly caught by the name of this piece; it seemed so mysterious and the story certainly followed that! I loved the ominous setting, and I can't ...

Hi there! Just popping by for a (not-so-quick?) review! Your writing style is very well defined and the sentences flow cohesively. The only thing I didn't really like was plot ...

Hello there! I haven't read many of your works yet, but I love your word choice! You paint a vivid picture and draw me into this fairytale world, but there's ...

Hi there! I loved your essay: you blend a lot of great imagery and always focus on why you want to be a writer, and it shows a lot about ...

Hello MissVelociraptor! I'm here for a quick review, so don't blink or you might miss it! 1. Your description of the nightmare is a little too forceful. Don't say "The ...

Hi again Traves! I was considering leaving just a small comment, but decided instead to do a quick review. First off, let me say again that I love the idea ...

Hi Beautifulsparkle! I'm here to review your article! First off, I want to say that religion is a very personal thing to talk about, so thank you for sharing your ...