queerwritergal

I really enjoyed this poem because it flowed together very well, as the word choice is solid throughout the poem. However, the number one problem with the writing was the ...

So I really, really enjoyed the flow of this poem. Every word connected to the next one, making the poem roll together, which adds to the already excellent word choice. ...

I love this piece, most because its written in this conversational tone I really enjoyed. The ability to hear the story being told, like someone was sharing a revelation, just ...

I really enjoyed the language used throughout the poem, it was beautiful. That said some words are repeated unnecessarily, especially since the poem is so short. The most obvious is ...

I really enjoyed the effortlessness of your rhyming, and how it helped the poem sound bittersweet. Usually, poems with rhyme tend to feel forced, but most of this was seamless. ...