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I didn't really enjoy this poem. It was far to short, not that I don't like short poems but this to me was far to short. I am guessing you ...

Hey-o! I like the play on words with your user-name, very catchy. Ok! Your poem was very lovely and had a good steady rhythm. Let's start with my favorites. Old ...

That reminded me of Katy Perry's "Thinking of You" video right? Yes it is not an original topic, yet it doesn't make it any less interesting. The poem was nice ...

This poem was nice but had a few problems. It was choppy. The flow would start then it would be stopped by an overly long line that doesn't fit in ...

When I was first scrolling the form yours caught my eye first. All these reviews, and I thought 'it must be good!' And I wasn't dissipointed! The flow was the ...

I liked this fanfiction a lot. Its been a very long time since I have read the first Harry Potter book, but this was enjoyable. The change on names was ...

This poem was a great change of pace because most people just write about feelings of lost and anguish, but this to me was a political poem which I don't ...

The poem was really dramatic and different in a good way. It's engaging and doesn't make you want to say what is the point even though you really don't know ...

I really like the poem. It was relate able and had vivid imagery. The one thing that I thought could have made this poem even better was if you had ...

Hi! Over all I wanna say that this was very good and interesting. I am wondering is this the end of the story? For the whole excerpt, way too many ...

The poem was okay. It seems as though the flow was forced and you were trying to hard. I'm always left alone No one cares about me Selfish! All they ...

The poem was really good. It had a choppy flow which I like cause it makes it different. You also convey your self very clearly. Where I ran into problems ...

I liked it. The ocean and waves are great metapors that are oftern over used, but you made it fit and did it nicely. My feet flogged with mud. If ...

It was very sweet, and it made me feel like I was laying out in a field in the middle of summer. The figurative lang. was really good. You related ...

It was a great historical fiction piece. What I loved is how you didn't try to cram to much in to the first few paragraphs. Like you left out the ...