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Re: Following the instructions
I love this kind of poem. Those poems that don't really have any punctuation or rhythm or things that people say we need on a poem. It only needs the ...
Feb 20, 2014 -
Re: Carving a New Future
Hi CamoryAnn! I would really love to talk to you because this is such a very emotional subject to write and very usual. What is it with us young people ...
Jan 22, 2014 -
Re: the land of dead
Hello fictional, I loved it! I think the idea was simple and yet said very dramatically. I liked most the last part, In my mind,' she said cheerfully even as ...
Jan 22, 2014 -
Re: I Am A Freak
This is a great poem. It doesn't need to have metaphors, deep words.. But everything written in th poem, it's real. I can feel the emotion the poet put on ...
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: Raining
I like it! I mean, i like light poems. And I love rains too :) On the other hand, I don't really understood the whole poem. I get the part ...
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: As We Are Now
I loved it! And I mean it. It's great and it's like based on reality. and this line struck me really hard. I can feel each passing second with my ...
Sep 23, 2011 -
Re: The Queen of Dolls
The ending scared me, it left me hanging with a thought running through my head, "What'd they do?" And OMG, the dolls played with each other. It's good! This is ...
Sep 18, 2011
