qaralynn

Helllooo HostofHorus! =) I'm here to review your work today! (obviously! XD) I normally don't really review stories so forgive me if my review isn't helpful at all. I want ...

Hellooo Justtrying! =) I'm here to review your work today! (Obviously XD) I want to start off with saying that this is a good write. So at first when I ...

Hellooo Devan! *huggles* I'm reviewing for christmas this august and I was wandering through the forums when I found your poem. I want to start off with saying that I ...

heey my shiney one! Here I am to review! I want to start off with saying that I really like this might be short and simple but it's totally cute ...

Heey unsocial butterfly! =) I want to start of with saying that I really liked this poem and that it totally made me think about someone on this site XD ...

Heey paperbackheart =) I want to start of with saying that I really like this piece. It is indeed short and simple but at the same time powerful like the ...

emoplushhhhh! I loffle this with all the fluffy pieces of my heart :D That's all I have to say really XD sorry I'm not much of a help.. LOFFLES! -qaralynn-

heey jessa!!! this is going to be pretty short cause I have to go to bed! But I want to say that I like this write! It totally makes you ...

Helloo Cailey!! I like this write! I love the imagery of this and could almost smell the rain XD I do agree with killkrusha on the: Of being stuck in ...

Heey payne the brainkeeperrrrr!!!!!!!!!!!! XD This totally made me grin! XD I really liked this and it made my day better :D I love the humor in this and how ...

Helloo Jessaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa! XD I like this poem! It's kind of sad and beautiful! There's a nice rhyme in there and I like the idea behind it (which you worked out ...

KARATEPUPPY WITH A FIRE HEART!! xD *HUGGLES TIGHTLY* Soo here I am to review your poem! I see that the others already took care of the criticism so I'm just ...

Heey deanie! I'm going to keep this short because I should actually be making homework XD But I like this write! It's something different and that's good. I think it ...

Heey awesome co-captain Tori!! *does the secret green handshake* I'm going to try to give you a good review but I'm not really good at reviewing stories. So forgive me ...

Helloo Dasiamari!! This song totally put a smile on my face XD I like it! I do suggest you expand on the sentences though (sorry if that isn't good english ...