purplepen

Hello SakuraFallsSweetly! I am purplepen and I shall be your first reviewer! Reviewing poetry isn't really my thing, but I'll try my best. By the way, don't worry about the ...

I don't think this sucks at all! At first, it was a little confusing, but it gradually got easier to understand. By the way, all of my corrections and comments ...

Hi! I really liked this piece. It was short, simple, and had a great message. I only spotted one error: Susan of thought the day ahead and grimaced. I think ...

You did a very good job at potraying the dark side of main character's emotions. I could pick up on her rage and jealousy very easily. The whole peice felt ...

Hi! This was very good! I can totally relate to this because my aunt Mary acted like that before she died. One second she would be giving me a hug, ...

Hi! Hm, I really liked this. It was very detailed and well writen. Nick’s mother brought out multiple dishes piled with food. ''They don't own me and neither do you. ...

FINALLY! The hat! Your stories are getting better and better with each one you post! This is by far your best GrayXClaire yet! It was so cute! I loved it! ...

First of all, I have read alot of lyrics on this site, but this is by far the best I have read (On this site). I absolutely loved it! I ...

Hi there! This was a very good piece. You have a good style of writting, and it was very fun reading this. I loved the discription, exspecially in the first ...

YES! I'm the first! :) I liked that you're adding in some drama. It should get really interesting now! As far as I can tell, you don't have any grammatical ...

Armstrong and jackolantern bassically summed up what I wanted to say. Another disadvantage of not being the first to review. *Sigh* It was really great though! I liked it alot, ...

I'm back! Darn...I see I'm not the first reviewer. Oh well...Anyway, on to the review! A chubby Mayor Thomas lied shirtless on a ducky-patterned towel while gargling some cheap beer ...

Hi! I'm glad I finally get to review a Harvest Moon piece by you! I'm going to try to use the 'critique sandwich' way to review this. Hopefully, you'll find ...

Hi there! Sorry no one has taken the time to review your work yet. Let’s fix that now, shall we? I don't have any nitpicks. You did an excellent job ...

Haha! That was a cute little story! I especially liked Sally the Snail. That was a cute little character you made up there! At first, I thought it was going ...