The Truth

by DemitriAdare

Published January 9, 2011

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purplepen wrote a review Review · Jan 9, 2011

Hi there! Sorry no one has taken the time to review your work yet. Let’s fix that now, shall we?
I don't have any nitpicks. You did an excellent job with your grammar and spelling.

DemitriAdare wrote:Most people never try anything that would be considered “weird”. If given a choice, they would choose what everyone else is choosing and wouldn’t think twice. They don’t know who their real friends are and might get stabbed in the back for it. I am not like most people.


I absolutely loved this part! I'm a lot like this person and can totally relate to this! You did a great job with description also. I think you should definitely continue this.

Happy writting!



Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see a shadow.
— Helen Keller