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Ooooh i like it :) But i agree, you should expand on it...oh! maybe you could do a whole book series and have Emma and Logan getting egaged,planning a wedding, ...

Loved it,like always!:D But i think that here: His intoxicating presence overwhelmed me. I couldn’t get my heart to calm down, nor the butterflies in my stomach. He leaned down, ...

hmmmm.... That was a nice story,veryentertaining,i loved the twisting at the end! but perhaps you could make it a bit more descriptive? Where exactly are they anyways? and when steven ...

i loved that! your characters feelings are described very well. I would,however,like to know what they look like. Overall it was a great romance. You will be posting further chapters ...

That was interesting....i could definitely see that being performed in one of those poetry slam....things. What was it about though?? I dont know, maybe i just cant comprehend the elaborate ...

I loved this story. you described everything with great emotion, i felt as if i was there watching this take place. :D Thank you for sharing this with us! I'll ...

OK. I didnt really understand it all. for instance, you stated your mom was in the hall. then a couple lines later shes been gone a long time? where was ...