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Re: The Raging Ocean - Chapter Three (Part II)
I really like your story! Keep the chapters coming!
May 10, 2012 -
Re: Cracked Chapter 1
... 1 word, revise...
May 10, 2012 -
Re: Cold Fire
I am interested in hearing other things you have written. Please write more! If you approve, I would like to put some of your writings (if you write more) on ...
May 8, 2012 -
Re: Being The New Girl
... Not good, not good. Work on it.
May 7, 2012 -
Re: Alexandra - Chapter 1
It is a good starting for a plot, but it tells too much. Trying showing more not telling. But overall its good.
May 7, 2012