purpleandblue22

Back again! I know you apologized for the long paragraphs, but to be honest, it worked much better this scene. Maybe it's because of the faster pace, but I didn't ...

Hey! This has taken a while to get a review, and I think I have figured out why. Although it is short and very well written, the paragraphs are dauntingly ...

Hey! Review time! I'm no poet, so I'm going to leave any review of that to someone who actually knows what they are talking about. As for the main work, ...

Aww how sweet! Sorry, they just sound adorable together. Keeping in mind that this is the first bit of your novel that I have read, I'm going to go with ...

Hey! Okay, I'm just going to say this outright. I've never been a big fan of prologues. I guess I missed the point of them, but you managed to pull ...

This is interesting. It defiantly caught my attention. I've always been a fan of fantasy, and I like where this seems to be going. Overall, I liked your writing a ...

Hey! I'm not much of a script writer, so I don't know how much help I can give, but I'm not going to lie, this is one of the few ...

Hey! I love the simplicity of your poem. I can almost picture my little cousin or me at that age. The one critique I have is the title. If I ...

Hey! I though I had already reviewed this, but apparently not, so here I am! She said as soon as she finished her work at her office, she went straight ...

HI!!! Haha, sorry I haven't been reviewing as often as I should, but I'm here now! *Cracks knuckles* alright then. Blimey! Alright, maybe this is because I'm American and don't ...

Hi there! Here to review! Alright, I just have to say that I haven't read chapter one so if I say something that really doesn't apply to the story feel ...

Hello! Here I am! Didn't I say I would come? (Oh yes I did.) Annnnd the review: Mum took me to Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes today and let me buy one ...

I told you I would come back, and here I am! :D Awwww, I always hated Dudly (still do) but I feel bad for his kids. I like the irony ...

AHHHH!!! Sorry for being late! Things have just been crazy in my house. Anyway, review! Loved Ron's speach, just gotta say that. It honestly made me laugh. I couldn't find ...

Hey, here to review! Alright, please keep in mind that I haven't read the first 11 chapters, so if any comments sound odd then just discard them. I couldn’t help ...