pulchritudinous

I can honestly say I loved reading this right through into the end. Your imagery is beautiful, the narrator kept my interest, and your introduction kept me intrigued. Your ending ...

I must say that I really enjoyed reading this. The only thing that turned me off a bit was the description about his mother's death, but that's just my own ...

C ongratulations! You're my first review! And my first praise, coincidentally. I really enjoyed this poem from beginning to end. Though it definitely could use a bit of tweaking, I ...