pudin.junidf

HI JK!! Welcome to YWS I'll tell you, you were right the beginning of the poem it's not so good, it has no shape and little rythm, you have to ...

Hi!! Well, I liked it, it was very good, very interesting. The story gives us a good view of how you felt and how the place was seen from your ...

Hi!! This is poem is nice, very likeable. I like it, very nice for a begginer. it flows nicely, and some of the rhyme does sound good and flows naturally ...

HI!! I'm finally here and out of homeworks. This is an excellent written piece. As weird as it may sound to some people who doesn't appreciate horror, I'm in love ...

HI!! Jess, I'm so sorry I dind't get this earlier, but no I'm here. I like how your story is turning out, pretty good. BUt I still think it needs ...

HI empress!1 Pudin here! So I liked your story it has lots of potential. Iwould like to read more. I have to admit, that I like this kind of stories. ...

Hi silly!! YOur poem is nice, it has potential but i still think it can be better. There were times when the flow was interrupted, and sometimes your rhyme sounded ...

This is awesome, I have no words to describe how good this is. It was unique, completely original; you made the reader see the scene and enter Belle's mind as ...

HI!! This was beautiful, inspiring. I loved it. It's so beautiful. YOu treated all the problems that our society is havng and put them in this poem in such a ...

So, I'm here, again!! Some things were cleard out now. This is very good, I like it. Now, i won't be as nitpicky (not that I ever was) in punctuation ...

Brilliant GSP, awesome!! It was very cool how you put the story and the socail context in wich you made it. I¡m little lost though, since I haven't read the ...

HI!! I liked your story, it has some sort of intrigue that makes it interesting to read. I don't know if I can correct anything since it is very good. ...

Hi!! It is very good for being a first attempt (mine sucked.lol) I like it; it practically tells us a story. It's interesting how you got to transmit the feelings ...

HI!! I'm Pudin. Well, your poem is definetely interesting. Although it doesn't give me a clear image. first of all: who you are talking about? and although it doesn't seem ...

Hey Irish!!! Hahaha,I love it, you and your friend are geniuses, seriously I would like to this performed. (with the actual Kristen Stewart adn Robert Pattinson) So, this was really ...