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Re: Dear Hanna
This brought tears in my eyes. Maybe I'm just really emotional today...anyways this was so good. One of the best short stories I've ever read. I loved the way you ...
Sun Aug 28, 2011 3:43 am -
Re: Age is but a number
I loved this story! It was funny, cute, and simple. I thought the best friend would think it was someone else not her own mother. I was convinced that he ...
Sun Aug 28, 2011 3:35 am -
Re: Rebels In Silence Part 1
*Appears in a puff of smoke* Hello, Rebel! I will be reviewing your story for today! Warning: I'm not the best of a review, so please forgive me if any ...
Fri Aug 06, 2010 1:08 pm -
Re: Atlantic Prep
Hello, I am Pshh and I will be reviewing you work for today! Warning: I'm not a very good reviewer so please forgive me if I am wrong with any ...
Thu Aug 05, 2010 5:24 pm -
Re: In the Pursuit of Happiness
Hello, Lena, I'm Pshh, and I will be somewhat reviewing your story. Okay, I liked this a lot. I loved how you described the characters and their emotions. I liked ...
Thu Aug 05, 2010 3:04 pm -
Re: The Inch - The Full Story - Chapter 3
I reallly like this story! I can't wait to read more! Everything looks good to me, but maybe I'm maybe you should re-read your work to make sure everything is ...
Sat Sep 05, 2009 2:27 pm -
Re: I Think That I'm Falling Again
Hey! So I read this and I'm going to edit somethings. Sorry if I sound harsh! The same stupid song plays whenever he texts me. And every time I hear ...
Thu Sep 03, 2009 8:38 pm -
Re: Forbidden Love
I really like this. Some of your sentences don't make sence, you might want to re-read this. I can't wait to read more! This pulls me in and I want ...
Wed Jan 21, 2009 8:47 pm -
Re: A Simple Mistake: Chapter Two
I read you first chapter and it was amazing! This chapter is even better! I'm dieing to know where you are going to take this. It's driving me crazy! Well, ...
Sat Dec 13, 2008 5:02 am -
Re: A Hundred Suns- Blind
Hey! I really like this. It's well written. I can't find any mistake, so that's good. I can't wait for the next part. I really liked this! Sorry I didn't ...
Sat Nov 29, 2008 6:11 am -
Re: infinite forever
I sorry if I repeat anything that was already said. Sorry if I seem harsh! I really don't mean too! :) his green eyes suddenly turning bue. You wrote bue. ...
Wed Nov 26, 2008 7:28 pm -
Re: Guess?
Hi! I really liked this! It really good! I loved reading this. This can easily happen to someone and you portrayed it very well. I liked the plot your description. ...
Wed Nov 26, 2008 6:51 pm -
Re: SAA: Sexually Abused Anonymous: A Memoir
I'm sorry that happened to you. It was very brave of you to post it up here! It's always good to vent. I was molested too. I was at my ...
Wed Nov 26, 2008 5:18 pm -
Re: My pathetic love story Chap. 1
I really like this. I love how she hates her own sister and they are twins too. I also love how you put the twist that she is dating the ...
Sun Nov 23, 2008 8:53 pm -
Re: DELETED STORY! DONT OPEN
I like this! A lot! There are quite a few errors, so you might want to re-read your stuff. Over all I really like this. I can't wait to read ...
Tue Nov 04, 2008 12:52 am
