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I'm glad you found it relatable, and thank you for the review! :)

Thank you so much! :)

Thank you so much for the review, and I will take a look at the last stanza and see if I can make it any better. I suppose the crazily ...

Thank you so much for your review, although I wasn't sure I quite understood it. Are you saying that you want my poem to be more passionate? Or that I ...

thank you so much, the line you picked out as sounding weird was actually a typo, I only noticed it after I'd posted the poem so sorry about that :) ...

That's perfectly fine. Thank you so much for reviewing it, I will be posting the next part very soon.

Thanks for the review :) just one question though - how are there too many situations? I'm pretty sure there's just one - Lizzie is saying goodbye to her brother ...

That's ok and thank you!

I'm sure they will be, and feel free to check out my work :)

I really like this, it holds a lot of suspense and is kind of scary in places! The way you opened with the story was mesmerising; you made the reader ...

Thanks for the review!

Thanks for the review :) to clarify the guy's heart became pure and it is inferred that his lover is the one who cured it and made it that way ...

Thank you :)

Thanks for the review - and my other poems contain more imagery; I wanted to keep this one short and simple, so that it tells a story.

thanks for the review, I guess I just wrote this poem to show the conflict that can occur in a seemingly perfect relationship and the aftermath - it is almost ...