powerofwords2008

thank you Pattycakes. i'll take your suggestions into mind.

interesting piece to say the least although i am not exactly sure what it is about. i would maybe elaborate it a bit more toward the middle section and well. ...

this is really good for your first attempt at poetry. i couldn't really tell that had it not been for the preface. the piece itself is well put together. i ...

i don't agree with the overall message of the piece, but the way in which it says is strong and also the punctuation and stanza seem to further accentuate the ...

i like this piece and the way you cover not only black as a color, but also its archetypal role. however, i feel as though there might be something missing ...

Evil's faithful cloak, Emptiness which no man should bear, Yet beauty and class beyond Orion, Shall death not swallow death?

this is a really good piece that manages to keep my attention and not only that but it balances the elements of darkness and love. it reminds me of a ...