powerofwords2008

i don't think the title of this collection really does justice to the pieces within it. the pieces themselves are very well written, and just about the only thing i ...

~This is the first poem I ever wrote.. So... I hope it's okay!:)~ This may be so, my fair lady; His hand entwined around hers makes her blush, however, my ...

i like the way you brought in the title toward the end and your overall description, but something that you could do is be a bit more detailed in places. ...

it's a really good poem and i like the way that the focus is mainly for children, but the thing is that sometimes the rhyme appears to be forced. it ...

i like the way you use the cellophane wall to portray the detachment. i also like your description of things and ideas. however, something that you could have done is ...

Days are bright, but their truth has left me blind. They let you down, they last too long, oh, night to me is much more kind. A night, sings a ...

i loved the way you were able to balance all of the details and still make it interesting. what you're doing with the story is awesome and also you manage ...

okay. i like the setting and what you are trying to do with it. however, i feel as though too much focus is being placed upon the great book and ...

this is an interesting piece. you have a good usage of dialogue and accents and also the transitions and description are good as well. the numbers on the other hand ...

there are some areas in which there is great description, but overall i would have like to have seen some more exposition. there were a few grammatical errors, but i ...