portersrose

Hi! I'll be your first reviewer today, sorry if I say one last thing, then say something else. As I'm rereading as I type. =P I luv this, and I ...

Soo good! Maybe Lucas helps her escape? IDK...=P This is very interesting, can't wait for the next part! Had a suggestion...HAD a suggestion, lost it. LOL XD XP OH! FOUND ...

Hey curiousvamprie! Glad you finally got it up, it was really good. Though I'm sort of counfused... I was to lazy to reread the prolouge and part 1... :| Anyways, ...

ACK! HOW HOW HOWWW!? HOW THE HECKATEE COULD I HAVE MISSED THIS? ACK! DOUBLE ACK! Idon't get it, I thought part 3 came...ohh! Anyways, I probably missed it when I ...

Really great story! As this is quick reply and you have to type at least 250 characters...bleh. I noticed a few spelling mistakes. Umm... you said new instead of knew ...

(I can't really call this a review since it's not really helpful, just one little tiny mistake) Now now abake, I think Abbawen deserves I little more recognition then that... ...

Agree with Sela, totally. Haha, you're gonna get your own little possy soon enough my dahling. With this writing you might become the idol of religion...hmm.. I'll call it..err... I'll ...

See now I feel all bad because I don't have any useful feedback to give you... :cry: joking. Awesome story, can't really say much else. PM me when Chap. 4 ...

Hey! Sorry it took me such a long time to read it, I couldn't find it... =P It was really good and I hope you make aa part 3 soon. ...

Awesome story! It's really, really, really, really, really, really (oh shut up Rose) good! I can't wait to see where this story goes! Sorry if your one of those people ...

Hey! I'm not much of a critique since I usually can't find anything bad... =P I feel so horrible. Anyways this is a really good beginning, it's extremely interesting and ...

Great story! As soon as I got the email from the webmaster I opened it up... and wala! There it was! So this is a really awesome story, but yeah, ...

Hey! Can you please please hurry and type up the 2nd chapter? Sorry if that sounds demanding but I just can't wait to read it. Plus, this was really good. ...

I would only type three words, but I can't, so I'll just type those three words plus some random 'untrue' comments. HORRIBLE DISGUSTING HORRIFYING and the comments.... This is a ...

THIS IS THE WORST STORY I'VE EVER READ. AND I CAN'T BELIEVE THAT YOU OF ALL PEOPLE WROTE IT!!!! HORRIBLE HORRIBLE HORRIBLE! aND WHY ARE YOU READING MY BOOK???? HUH?! ...