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thank you very much, Kelpies.

wow. very helpful review. thank you very much.

a noob is a slang term for newbie , i believe. thank you very much for checking out my work. and for complimenting my trailer.

*things i overlooked and mistyped.

oh, i'm sure these were thing i just overlooked. thank you very much for the helpful review. i will take your advice of reading everything out loud. porcey xoxo P.S. ...

yes, "he" will be revealed in chapter... it would be fun to hear your thoughts on the following chapters.

yes: that officer is a brat. thanks so much for checking this out, Kelpies. porcey xoxo

thank you for the review.

hullo, dear. thank you very much for this. it's a shame i hadn't seen this on the notifications, so i just read this tonight. but i get your point. thank ...

hullo, Cricket. i thought i'd loosen up a bit with this piece and try going for an omniscient POV. thank you for the nitpicks. helped a bunch.

oh, i'm sorry. which part was not clear? *blushes*

you are most welcome.

and i drew the artwork myself. thank you. xoxo

this is chapter two. thank you very much, Elinor. if i may ask, what is wooden structures? thank you. i'll work on my narration. good day to you.

p.s. read that this is based on real life. *whimpers*