popatemyheart1994

I F*****G LOVED THIS! Like a sex and the city but for teenagers it felt like. So candid and honest. Like one of the other reviewers said..you rock!

You are an amazing writer.

Great taste in music. I loved nearly all of these :)

Oh no, haha it says I get the bus to Penny Lane, I'm not actually on the bus as the poem progresses. I'm on Penny Lane. Thanks for your review!! ...

You are the best poet on this entire website. I'm not even joking. You inspired me :D

I thought this was really bitter-sweet. The imagry was beautiful and I really loved the narrative flow. Good job. XXX

Your all amazing. thankyou!!! :)

I found this poem quite enjoyable, although not what I expected, I love the way it flows and you demonstrate a very controlled and high quality style of writing, which ...

Fantastic! Fantastics! Fantastic! xx

I know the structure is weird, but it helps the lines flow better. I'd love to hear your comments!!

I would like to dedicate this poem to anyone who has ever been wronged or scorned by someone they love or thought they did. You are the Kings and Queens ...

Thankyou everyone again for all the great reviews. Some great advice there. I'm glad you liked the poem, I wrote it for you! :)

I love this! I love the lyrics and the way you have structured them perfectly in the song. A great song to read! Well done!

I thought this was very good for your second post! I like the idea of the poem and the structure is great. It is very simple but smart and good ...

Thankyou for my reviews, they werereally helpful, I'll be sure to review some of your poems aswell. Thanks for liking my poem it means allot to me, I wrote it ...