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Hey there:) I am not going to go over the grammatical errors, because the previous review did a great job at that. I will point out the plot nitpicks though. ...

Hey:) I liked this. I like your use of language - it is heavy, but filled with emotions, I don't see that around a lot. No grammar mistakes I could ...

Oooohhhhh, creepy!! But so good! There are no grammar mistakes I could spot, here is the bit I really liked: Then I carved her, Into the shape of my curse. ...

Hey:) This was amazing, I really liked how you carried out the emotions in here. Very believable, and beautiful imagery. Here come the nitpicks:D I can still see you- you ...

Hey there:) This is one of the first poems with a political view I have seen in a while, and I must say, it's good. In a way that if ...

I really like the Old English "thy"'s. It is interesting, and can be interpreted in different ways. I think you need a comma after the second Right in the third ...

Ahhh this was amazing. A very intriguing, and captivating read. Really is "sweet revenge"... I really like the first paragraphs where you describe what the hunter is like. Some nitpicking: ...

I know exactly how you feel. I have not seen the movie, but there's nothing more upsetting that seeing a badly done movie. I watch a lot of movies, but ...

Oh my god, this is really good! I loved the fact that the class is kind of 'studying' you, it's very original, and very true as well, I think it ...

Hey:) Oh, how depressing, oh how good!:D Only one thing: I really doubt that a torture method would be putting their heads into hot bleach. That's a bit too much ...

Hey, how have you been? I really like this, except some little pointers: "I could send letters to the king." - didn't quite understand that metaphor...:) "It's all of you" ...

This is exactly how I feel about my writing. I agree, a blank sheet of paper looks very scary at first, and if no words come to mind, I just ...

Actually, this isn't nothing, I liked it. It has a huge contrast from despair of separation to acceptance (to an extent) I really like the first paragraph. The ones that ...

Hey! Yay, I'm here again, once again enjoying this! Here come nitpicks: Eagar - you mean eager?:) I like this, you kept the same detailed descriptions of your surroundings and ...

Hey:) I really like this! I like how you compare the opposites, but in the end, it all adds up to "Life Is Good", because there needs to be a ...