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beginning to see the little mistakes and am working to make it better. Your advice makes me grow from a beginner to something better.

Thanks for the insight, i guess am still a beginner but don't worry, i'll take you advice and become better.

It was kinda weird reading you poem. I felt like i'd stopped in time to see darkness around me. Its not the best but a very good poem.

Thanks thanks thanks thanks for the review. Am gonna use the corrections you gave me on the next chapter. Am so damn happy today.

Am not a very big fan of poems but i strangely liked yours and ended up reading it like five times with a big smile on my face :)

I have one simple thing to say: this is AWESOME...i have my eye on you

Thanks for the review. And thanks big time for the help. Well am not that great with my grammer but i'll do my best to "beta" it and make everything ...

nice...this is the first time reading a fantasy which takes my attention