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ok...ok...ok, now this is what am talking about, this is what i LOVE to read. It rhymes, is harmonious and to make it all better, it coordinates perfectly. "As fatigue ...

Ok...ok...ok, am not the king of poems but i've gotta say that though yours is a very good attempt, it does need some more work. Firstly, adding some rhyming last ...

Hmmm, well it's not the best poem ever but it has some light. Although am not an expert in poem (am still almost beginning to love poems), i think you ...

Hmmm...makes me feel a slight tingle in my body. Gotta say, i love it. Gets me all ruffled up and looking for more. But i guess the only thing missing ...

ok..ok...ok. Well, i've read some pretty good poems today and this can surely count as one of them. But it has some few problems that worry me. Note that it's ...