plaguewritings

Hi! I liked this! Most of what I want to say is just to watch your tense. You changed from past tense to present tense then back again. I liked ...

Hi! This was really, really good. I remember reading the version of this you uploaded a while back? I can safely say that I got sucked in both times. I'm ...

Hi! Radio here with a review! I thought this was a good piece and before I get to what I liked I'm gonna point out a few things. I think, ...

Hi, I'm going to start out with what I like about this. -It's very poetic, the sentences flowed and it was very graceful. -There was a definite somber tone to ...

Hey, This is good but I have a small suggestion. Maybe you should add a little more into what the pov person about all of this? Maybe why they feel ...

Hi, ShadeMaster! This was intense and dark. I was enraptured from the very beginning. A few things to consider: To add to the emotion of the piece, try and shorten ...

Hi!! This is a super cool idea! I like how you left a lot of stuff to think and wonder on. That got me interested really quick. Are we going ...

Hi!! I really, really like the way this story and these characters are building! The pace is great and the way you write action is awesome! I'm assuming we're gonna ...

Hey again! I really like where this is going! You left a lot open here for the reader to think on. I agree completely with everything Jenny said about this. ...

Yo, it's ya boi Radio here again with another review! I like this because he has to deal with not being able to see, and you wrote that well. I ...

Hey, Radio here with a review! This was very good! I do have a couple things to say, though: I agree with felistia in that more senses other than sight ...

Hey, Radio here with a review! This was super cool, I really loved it! Right from the get go, I noticed the voice behind the character. She sounded cold and ...

Yo, it's ya boi Radio here with a review! Overall this was pretty good! I got a strong western vibe from this? Is this supposed to be a western vibe ...