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Re: As She Passed
Thank you! I think I fixed everything you mentioned, but I'm not really sure :/ Anyways, I appreciate the review and I'm glad you liked it :)
May 14, 2014 -
Re: The Cap'n's Wife
Yes, I meant to start a new line. I actually copy and pasted it from another site I posted it on and I had trouble finding where all of my ...
May 13, 2014 -
Re: Where the Shadows Disappear - Introduction
Okay, fixed everything you mentioned. I added a little more to the end, so please tell me what you think!
Feb 17, 2012 -
Re: Where the Shadows Disappear - Introduction
Thank you for the feedback! Originally I didn't have it stopping so abruptly, but I wanted a short snippet for a tester. I probably should have just put in the ...
Feb 17, 2012