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Re: Blasphemy
Hi there Miss Fortuna I liked how Ramereon was a demon that lived in Hell but was in love with someone who only wanted Heaven. At first I didn't understand ...
Aug 3, 2009 -
Re: Abuse
I really like your descriptions because they were extremely vivid. It was a little confusing when she was sitting on the bench with her friend though. I wasn't quite sure ...
Aug 3, 2009 -
Re: Everlasting Sky Chapter 1: The Horror Within
Whoa. I did not see that coming. Overall i thought it was... okay I guess. Some parts I didn't understand like when she was a wolf or whatever she was ...
Jul 13, 2009 -
Re: The Darkangel
I liked it alot. I've read many twilight fanfictions and I've almost never seen an evil Edward. He would always be a pushover and not at all evil mean vampirish. ...
Jul 13, 2009 -
Re: Twilight
I won't lie I loved Twilight. I loved it because of Jacob. He seemed like an actual person not just a figment of Stephenie's imagination. I tried to re-read Twilight ...
Jun 29, 2009 -
Re: The choice.
I'm sorry I don't have anything super incitefull to say but I would like to say I loved it. I'm not really sure why I like it so much I ...
Jun 6, 2009 -
Re: Destiny
I like it, but some of this pieces are not put in the right spot. (I think that's what I mean to say.) Like you could have made it less ...
Jun 6, 2009 -
Re: Sounds
I liked your way of writing, but all in all I didn't understand what it was about. Yes I understand that it is about Sound. I just don't see what ...
Jun 6, 2009
