pinkangel54123

Hi there Quill. I'm here to review for you. There simply was no escape from the sting. I would change sting to pain since you use sting in some form ...

Hi there Aery. Umm...I'm not quite sure I can review this. It's very different, and a bit odd. I mean you're using punctuation and things as characters. It was extremely ...

Hi there Careless...or is it Aussie? Anyway, pinkangel is here to review. I'm not very good with grammar but I'll point out the obvious, and I'll tell you what I ...

Hi there pinkangel here to review. "Yeah well... I'm not the one under depression today." He replied. The one under depression? Maybe, the one depressed. Also, take the period out ...

That was definetly...different. It was interesting, too. Oddly enough at the beginning it reminded me of Winnie the Pooh because Kalu knew he had something to do but didn't know ...

I really liked this, and it was really uhh...vague? It was certainly a head scratcher because of all of the plotting going on. It made my head buzz which means ...

I'm not trying to sound rude or anything, but it's annoying when you post again on your post to tell people to review. I know you want reviews, but you ...

Got your PM and here I am. Anyway I like how the beginning seems to be second person, but when you introduce the I part it's like someone is watching ...

That was very well written. It has just enough suspense that I want to read more, but not too much so that it is overbearing. I'm extremely curious about what ...

I'm not the best at critiquing poetry, but I'll give it a shot. Real love is injustice or pleasure’s peak? That question mark doesn't seem right. I can see that ...

I liked it, but there were a couple things that I didn't understand meaning you didn't give me enough information. I don't quite understand where Elizabeth's parents are. Did they ...

That was very eye opening. It makes me think about the things I say to people that I don't know very well and how they may be hurt by something ...

I liked it, but I didn't quite get why her parents and everyone in the house were talking while they were on fire. It just seemed odd to me. Also ...

I like how you used longer words, but how they still kept the pace and weren't chunky. The way you but in descriptions was genius. I loved that most of ...

Hi. I'm here to review as you can see. The first thing I saw when I looked at this was how some parts were bolded or italicized for no apparent ...