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I was a little surprised when I saw this post! At first, I saw a bunch of colors and tiny writing, odd for a poem. But then I realized, you ...

By the first sentence, I was already hooked. The way you showed imagery throughout the story was great. The paragraph on the death I really liked. You got straight to ...

Wow! I loved how you made readers feel almost sorry for the doll in the beginning. A writer is naturally good when the reader can feel a type of emotion ...

Hi! First, it looks great. It is so relatable, touching on Writer's Block and loss of creativity which all of us writers can relate to. I have one suggestion for ...

Hi, anne27, Wow, I just read your poem! This poem is the most relatable and beautiful thing that I've read in a long time. You can see true character throughout ...