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He's read it, but like i said, he needs a real chapter for us to get into it more right?

Thanks man, and you responded quick. I'll take a look at the flow and see if I can tweek it. ~Mr. Pie

Wow, you were quik, thanks. All and all I think I'll keep the repitition. I see what you're talking about and I'll try to make it work, but it keeps ...

I agree with Firestalker, I'm still going to read the third book even though it's not the best. I still like it after all.

Well, it's not a BIG deal, it's just he got it published at a young age is all. But that's only because his parents own a publishing company. Lucky son ...

True, but he most likly doesn't belong to a writers web site like us to get help and improve. I guess we have the advantage right? I'm so happy.

Okay, thanks Kit, that makes it easier.

Thanks, I'm working on it.

I loved it to tell the truth. You showed us your feelings very well. Still, I can't get an in-def picture here. Even so I liked. I just got a ...

At least It made it better. I'll see what I can do.

You have a point, but what I added my make it better ^_^

Thanks, let me see if I can gather anything else from the tree outside my window, that's inspiration for ya :)

Yeah, let me see what i can do with it and maybe put a back to it. Hmm...

I could go on and on about LOTR, but I won't, so, peace.

I'd say LOTR, the Hobbit included. Harry Potter just doesn't grab me as much.