philip17

Thanks! Yeah it's a pretty rough rough draft haha. I enjoy screenwriting more but I am afraid someone might steal my idea if I upload it onto the website xD

Hey! No i like critique especially good one! Thanks a lot! I appreciate it! (: I'll get to tweaking it later haha when I have time :) thanks for taking ...

Great stuff! Quick and straight to the point haha but well written! (: I really did like it!! And that you ended the poem in a question is also good! ...

That's cute thank you! (: I'll go check out some of your stuff!

Thanks! (: Oh and yeah that was a spelling error my bad!

Thanks a lot! I really love good thorough critique! This means a lot to me! Thank you haha :) I'll definitely check out some of your poems or short stories ...

Darn! That is quite chilling! Love the use of language! Especially the last stanza nicely wraps up the entire poem! Great work! I was looking for a good horror poem ...

Great piece of work! I've never read a poem, which had a kind of conversational structure! That's what made it very interesting! Very deep emotions that you're portraying really made ...