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And may you live long and prosper as well, haha

Heh, right, not really a story, just an autumn dirge. The pigeons? They are such a symbolic symbolism that I couldn't possibly start to explain. Anyway, glad you produced an ...

Again in the style of Eastern European speculative fiction, again excellent. The pulp geek in me would have preferred the Prof. to meet his other less intense self and realize ...

Will is definitely not the hero of the story as you told it. He is simply the princess of your story who has been locked in the tower awaiting her ...

Hi there, Dream. Now I personally when reviewing try to not judge the plot, the characters and the narrative voice, because the reaction to these is highly subjective. There are ...

...why not try plan a plot specifically around some of the ideas you would like to convey? But not have the ideas summarized by the narrator, nor voiced by characters, ...

Hey Dream, glad you liked the nits. As to research; first you don't need it for this story, just one vague sentence about an electrical lamp or gas lamp, or ...

Parker, thank you for your detailed feedback. Do keep in mind please, if I ever do enter the mood for someone to bully me for my own good into conforming ...

Parker, thank you for your detailed feedback. Do keep in mind please, if I ever do enter the mood for someone to bully me for my own good into conforming ...

Oh yeah, Emmaline, I needed that :)

Justtrying, thanks very much. Acted on all advice except the name

Thanks, Nate, polish, yes, absolutely. Dialogues, also various mini-inconsistencies, like the tourist's livefeed suddenly becoming a recording, etc. But he'll have to stay a space tourist on a space w

Hi Ziggy! Thanks for the review. It was just a bomb out of nowhere. What sort of expression did he have on his face, was he gloomy? What of the ...

Dear Hazelgreen, and thank you for the lovely reaction! Alas, the ending isn't a cliffhanger, it's supposed to be a 'twist ending', like with the other professor Hosselhoff story. I ...

Thank you, thank you:) I make no promises to continue this, thought, sometimes I just have a half-hour's inspiration which leads to an open-ended fragment and things end with that.