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Wow, thank you. I haven't really gotten down to formatting yet, just trying to pound out a decent rough draft. Thank you!

Thanks for the review, I'll take it into consideration :)

thanks for the review. Glad you liked it :)

Hi I think it was definitely a good idea for a poem, but I also think you could have gone a lot farther with it. The imagery could use a ...

my gosh, your imagery is pretty dang incredible

k thanks :)

well, I guess in that stanza I added a little too much personification... :)

thank you, that was helpful :)

haha yeah. And if you are going to lecture on grammar, I'll point out your spelling of the word "coarse." :)

well, thank you for the review. Do you have any works one could critique? It seems to me as though your purpose on here is to review others and hide ...

I thought it had good imagery, but maybe a little more structure