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Thank you very much! You helped me a lot! I definitely agree that I need to work on word variance and descriptions of characters and emotions. Thank you for taking ...

It is weird, and almost painful, when that happens. I think as long as you're happy with your work, you shouldn't let other's opinions change how you feel.

Well it's very good for something you just quick wrote.

Sweet! Merlin is literally my favorite show, and one of the many fictional things that have emotionally destroyed me. I didn't know any of that because I live in the ...

It's beautiful to see all the people who believe in and love Jesus on this website. Great job! :D

Thank you very much! It means a lot to me. Even I abuse my rights from God; there are very few people that don't. I agree that it's sad how ...

I am indeed! But everyone should be :) Thanks for the support! There's more to come in the somewhat near future :D Happy Holidays!

Thanks for being understanding :) You're welcome

Thanks for the advice :)

Well... the thing is, I write plainly what I feel. I see the problems in that, especially with flow and rhythm. Those aren't my priority when I write, but I ...

Thanks for the tips! What I meant was that they had someone to care for them, but I do like it when people take it in a way that's more ...

Thank you; I will take what you said to heart, as I will with SilverKnight. I will be sure to reread and clean this up soon. Are you saying I ...

I would never had thought about this before I read 23 Minutes in Hell a few months ago. It changed how I viewed some things and got me thinking about ...

Thank you! I'm so glad even a nonChristian appreciated this and understood it as well. It was a definite goal to not offend people with this; all I wanted was ...

-sigh- thank you. I'm so relieved that other people can understand it and relate to it. I appreciate it much! Merry Christmas!