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Bailey, you know from what I've told you that a lot of reviews on here are harsh. You should have said something about it being a joke because we take ...

Thanks, Lassie. One of the only reasons I ended it like that was so I wouldn't forget. I wrote it after a test and when I got home I decided ...

Eeep, I'm doing Screnzy this year! I tried NaNo last year so I'm branching out. My username on the Screnzy site is: Snoopy19 (same as NaNo) I've never written a ...

Snoinkarina, I love how your character is so sad about his own story when he begins to talk we hear nothing. Poor guy. But it was very amazing, you should ...

Cheese :) Much better. You explained a reason for most of the stuff and I'm glad you did that with out going into too much detail. I'm beginning to think ...

Oh, they are supposed to be ghosts? Well that changes things. Make that more clear though because just because you know that doesn't mean I do :) ~peanut~

I know Aqua said this one but I highly recommend Elsewhere by Gabrielle Zevin. I also loved Nineteen Minutes by Jodi Piccoult and Deadly Little Secrets by Laurie Faria Stolarz. ...

Hi Mo, I looked at it again and I think the flash backs really helped with the emotion. I think if you are going to keep going with this story ...

Amy, I realize what I did. I changed the POV from an 8 year old boy to a girl. When I changed the name I didn't fix it before I ...

Thanks for your reviews guys! And Stella if you look back at this I just want to you to know that Lin said almost the same things you did when ...

Thanks for the reviews everyone. I know it's terrible :) But I'm going to probably rewrite it since I wrote it in about five minutes and NaNo's messing with my ...

Thanks guys, I'm not using this story for the contest, but I was just messing with writing styles. Thank you for the reviews. ~peanut~

Jon, this was really good, and I feel dumb reviewing this because if there was something wrong with it I didn't see it. Like I said I don't know how ...

JK, this was so sad. The emotions were amazingly well written and thought out. The only thing I saw wrong with it was: He stood, rooted to the pot (spot), ...

I liked how William is just minorly injured at the the end, it was different than usual stories about this sort of thing. I think maybe this could go in ...