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Re: The Dragon and the Dragon Slayer
Hello! First of all...this story was amazing. You effectively pulled the reader along from one moment to the other. The wit and diction was spot on. Your straightforward tone made ...
Sep 19, 2015 -
Re: Heartlines
Hello! I really enjoyed reading your story (: Your imagery and descriptions were beautiful which made the story really come to life before my eyes. You also have a very ...
Sep 16, 2015 -
Re: No One. (I edited the old poem but I think I like the original better)
Hello! I really enjoyed the ideas in this poem. They are very strong and very well thought out. It's definitely something that I am constantly pondering over myself. I think ...
Sep 13, 2015 -
Re: Children Are
Hello Cairo! This piece is so beautiful. I absolutely love the imagery and figurative language you used throughout your poem. It really solidifies the theme and enhances what you're trying ...
Sep 11, 2015
