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  • Short Story » Fantasy, Narrative Re: The Dragon and the Dragon Slayer

    Hello! First of all...this story was amazing. You effectively pulled the reader along from one moment to the other. The wit and diction was spot on. Your straightforward tone made ...

    Sep 19, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Heartlines

    Hello! I really enjoyed reading your story (: Your imagery and descriptions were beautiful which made the story really come to life before my eyes. You also have a very ...

    Sep 16, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: No One. (I edited the old poem but I think I like the original better)

    Hello! I really enjoyed the ideas in this poem. They are very strong and very well thought out. It's definitely something that I am constantly pondering over myself. I think ...

    Sep 13, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Children Are

    Hello Cairo! This piece is so beautiful. I absolutely love the imagery and figurative language you used throughout your poem. It really solidifies the theme and enhances what you're trying ...

    Sep 11, 2015


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