pastelqueen

Ohhhhh! I see now, thanks for the clarification. Reading it over again I recognize where it says that, now it makes a lot more sense. :)

This was a very beautiful and complex poem that does one of my favorite things you can do with poems, play with the writing style. Please never hesitate to continue ...

Aw, I'm really glad that it meant that much to you. I always try and do my best to write reviews that point out the best parts of stories, I'm ...

Hi! This is a very interesting poem that seems to go through multiple different situations people can be in that shorten or end their life all together. That is a ...

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Hi there! This poem is just plain pretty. The imagery and word choice used paints such an amazing mental picture for the reader that it could almost be a scene ...

Hi! This was a very great creative writing. I wouldn't call it a poem, because the only thing that seems to be in the form of a poem is the ...

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Holy Moley! One of my biggest complaints with most poems is that people don't utilize the unique style of writing offered to them in poetry. You use every single bit ...

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Holy Moley! One of my biggest complaints with most poems is that people don't utilize the unique style of writing offered to them in poetry. You use every single bit ...

Hello there! This, I feel, was a very different view on depression than what I've seen in a while. Usually something as melancholy as depression is symbolized by darkness or ...

THANK YOU THANK YOU! I am super clueless whenever it comes to grammar, so having someone help me with that is extremely helpful. I am so glad you enjoyed it!

Thanks so much for the review! I do agree with you that y paragraphs are a bit too long, I'll look out for that in the future. As for your ...