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Re: Eternally Punished
I think you'll get some negative feedback simply because of the content, but I like this poem, and I hope that others like it, too. I love the simplicity and ...
Mar 12, 2014 -
Re: Bang
This is absolutely stunning. I love onomatopoeia, especially in poetry. It creates such vivid imagery that really makes you feel the character. You used so many strong words, and it ...
Mar 12, 2014 -
Re: Is Religion Evil?
This. is flawless. I wish everyone could read this and understand. It's so sad that people don't actually read the bible for themselves, but they hear "the bible says this", ...
Mar 12, 2014 -
Re: Too Many of Us
THIS. THIS IS THE REASON I AM A PART OF THIS COMMUNIUTY. GEMS LIKE THIS. But in all seriousness that was genuinely beautiful, and something that so many people can ...
Mar 8, 2014 -
Re: How Jane died.
Wow. This is stunning. Your use of imagery is beautiful, and I loved the content. The abrupt ending was clearly a metaphor of her death, and I loved the subtlety ...
Mar 8, 2014 -
Re: Shattered Reflection
This is so well written. You drew me in immediately, and the plot was twisting. Great job.
Sep 11, 2012 -
Re: Dance
OMG. I absolutely love this poem. THe adjectives you used are so precise, and being a dancer myself, I can totally relate. Nice job.
Sep 11, 2012
