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Thanks for the review, Sarai! Honestly, I just wanted to try the lowercase thing. :D

Yes, it is about a child going blind in the literal sense, but it can also be interpreted in the way that people criticize others views as being "wrong" even ...

Yes, it is about a child going blind in the literal sense, but it can also be interpreted in the way that people criticize others views as being "wrong" even ...

@Weymouth, if you're thinking about changing the name, (just for an idea, the name you have is already good :)) I think you should name it either Divulgence or Snake-like ...

Wow, thank you so much! This means a lot. I hope my mom loves it too! :D

XD Thanks! I know, right! Yours is cute too ;D

Oh, wow. Sorry about that.

Nice poem...I think... I actually can't believe it... Hopefully, for your sake, this didn't actually happen to you...

Yes, soccer. And the narrator's parents. Sorry; I like to give the reader room to relate and imagine, so I hold back on the specifics. I NEED to stop that. ...

She hid away her desperation to try to save her own dignity, blinding them by giving them a false sense about her security and her courage that she in real ...

Oh my gosh, thanks so much!

Thank you! I did mean that she skipped a step when she went up the stairs. I think about my style of writing a lot, and I hate how I ...

Thanks for the suggestion Percybeth! I was actually thinking of that when I was writing the poem (I admit to how lazy it was for me not to fix it). ...

Thanks for the criticism; I'll work on changing a few things. Definitely not my best work; I honestly just thought jillion sounded cool. Call me a child if you want ...

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