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thanks for the review! if I ever do a spoken version, I'll be sure to let you know.

I'd be glad to. :)

thanks so much, Lumi.

I'm so grateful for you, and for this. you deserve more than tears.

Thanks so much! I like your suggestions, and will definitely consider them when writing further chapters.

that's super interesting! I hadn't thought of that, actually. your way would definitely add another dimension to the story...I might even contemplate making of few changes. :) thanks for your ...

this means so much to me. thank you.

hi Jose. I don't know where, but I'd read this before. ARE YOU ACCUSING ME OF PLAGIARISM? how unreasonable . I will not stand for these unsubstantiated allegations. I'm getting ...

you're amazing. thanks for the review, and I'm soo glad you like it. by "mental flow diagram", she was just referring to a flow diagram she'd constructed in her mind. ...

Thanks for your suggestions, Om! I'd been wondering about the effect of the filler words as I wrote the chapter, so I'm glad you pointed them out. ;) Thanks again! ...

My school actually doesn't really have a jock clique, nor do we have a football team. :P I think that (apart from my habit of watching too much TV) Chris's ...

Thanks so much again! While I don't like to spoil too much ;), Alena is definitely very extroverted and open, especially to Koskia (who Alena considers to be her best ...

Ahh, thanks for pointing out any wordiness, because that's something I definitely struggle with. So glad the stereotypes aren't a problem so far! Definitely let me know if they are/become ...

It's honestly so funny to me that you, as the reader, can't remember her real name. Chris is so intent on making people call her Val to the extent that ...

STML is an acronym for Short Term Memory Loss--I probably should've made that more clear! You're definitely right in that I need to develop Koskia's character more. I often dip ...