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That poem was very intelligently written, and I loved all of the book-person analogies. I had to read it twice, and this is obviously meant in a good way :). ...

That was so nice! However, there are a few mistakes I think you should patch up to make this an even greater poem. 1. During this line: "First I asked ...

That's so sweet. The message of the poem is so honest, and everybody has that one time in their life that they feel helpless and confused, and they don't really ...

There's so much great imagery in your poem! Even though it was about someone's inner struggle and their desire not to spread that "flame" onto the one they love (I ...

There was a lot of truth in this poem; and I agree that sometimes two people call themselves "friends" when all they do is lie and walk side by side ...

"Everything is impossible until you do it." I love that! I wish that quote was mine :-). I love your analogy to the cloud and the puddle; it greatly describes ...