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Re: Homemade Devil
Haha this is actually how I feel right now. Very short, very to the point, and I like it. And I have nothing left to say so Happy January!!!
Jan 13, 2011 -
Re: Divine Eternity
I feel like such a loser but I like the broken pattern of it. An ode to big words. And you used words that aren't even in my dictionary, so ...
Jan 13, 2011 -
Re: The In-Between
This is beautiful. It is such a beautiful nightmare. I love it completely. Your imagery is great and I could picture it unfolding. You have a great talent.
Jan 9, 2011 -
Re: You died, tonight.
Haha, this was funny. Though yeah, I agree that it didn't flow well. Still, all for fun, so I don't really care. The last line makes me laugh.
Jan 3, 2011 -
Re: Tea
It's witty and simple, which is what I love in a poem! I loved "The Earl was drunk." That line made me laugh. This really isn't much of a review ...
Dec 26, 2010 -
Re: Fire
Oops! Sorry I meant Persephoneia! Again, I'm sorry for that typo!
Dec 26, 2010 -
Re: Pros and Cons to dating a Ninja
Haha, I like this. It made my day! What would happen if you dated a girl ninja? Haha it was fun to read.
Dec 24, 2010 -
Re: (unnamed)
Well, I like it. It's short and sweet and to the point. I think that eulogy is a perfect word, but through me off a little. All in all, good ...
Dec 23, 2010 -
Re: Hide and Seek Ch. 1
okay it grabbed my attention. there were some odd places though and i find it odd that the main character would sympathize with Nico so quickly. That was a little ...
Dec 23, 2010
