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Thanks so much all of you. I'll keep trying! Yours truly, Cally

Oh yes, and thank you Suzanne for the help and suggestions. I really appreciate tips on how I can improve my poetry. Thank you honestly, Mikaela (Cally)

Thank you blacktiger3915 and justin5676. You totally just made me feel very happy inside. I would appreciate, instead of you just bashing my three year old poetry, you actually give ...

Thanks so much, I REALLY (in caps as to show appreciation not sarcasm. Honestly.) appreciate this. I'm very... how can I put it? I'm very slow(?)... when it comes to ...

Thank you so much! I will write a poem, actually I think I have, about the bad feelings from the summer before. It's actually quite an interesting story. I'm sorry ...

This was good, I mean, well written, but, for some reason, it doesn't catch my attention. The descriptions in the beginning are incredibly written, but they're so clustered together that ...

This was good, I mean, well written, but, for some reason, it doesn't catch my attention. The descriptions in the beginning are incredibly written, but they're so clustered together that ...