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  • Poetry » Other, General Re: A Heart Split in Two

    I really liked your poem. I could relate to it, but I got confused. I didn't exactly understand why you used all of the, excuse the term, "old" words, for ...

    Jun 6, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Endless Time Stops

    I liked it *Big thumbs up* It was very creative and not entirely my fault that I got distracted by the shape it makes. I'm not saying that I was ...

    May 27, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Pirate Ship

    Hello, I like your poem a lot, and it's not just because it reminds me of Johnny Depp. Anyways, you use great word choice very well. Everything fit well together ...

    May 27, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Not quite anything at all

    Hey, I like your poem. It has a good rhythm and I know what you're going for. I got a little off when you repeated "Walking in a circular motion." ...

    May 27, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Death's Dance

    Hey, I like your poem, especially about the idea of death's dance. Which is basically the whole thing. Anyways, I like the way you describe the dancing and the movements, ...

    May 27, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Dear Mr. Publisher

    Hello, I liked your poem a lot. I can relate to it, well, not exactly, but at least I know what you mean. Besides the part that everyone says, "Vain ...

    May 27, 2008
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: A small excerpt!

    This was good, I mean, well written, but, for some reason, it doesn't catch my attention. The descriptions in the beginning are incredibly written, but they're so clustered together that ...

    May 27, 2008


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