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Re: A Heart Split in Two
I really liked your poem. I could relate to it, but I got confused. I didn't exactly understand why you used all of the, excuse the term, "old" words, for ...
Jun 6, 2008 -
Re: Endless Time Stops
I liked it *Big thumbs up* It was very creative and not entirely my fault that I got distracted by the shape it makes. I'm not saying that I was ...
May 27, 2008 -
Re: The Pirate Ship
Hello, I like your poem a lot, and it's not just because it reminds me of Johnny Depp. Anyways, you use great word choice very well. Everything fit well together ...
May 27, 2008 -
Re: Not quite anything at all
Hey, I like your poem. It has a good rhythm and I know what you're going for. I got a little off when you repeated "Walking in a circular motion." ...
May 27, 2008 -
Re: Death's Dance
Hey, I like your poem, especially about the idea of death's dance. Which is basically the whole thing. Anyways, I like the way you describe the dancing and the movements, ...
May 27, 2008 -
Re: Dear Mr. Publisher
Hello, I liked your poem a lot. I can relate to it, well, not exactly, but at least I know what you mean. Besides the part that everyone says, "Vain ...
May 27, 2008 -
Re: A small excerpt!
This was good, I mean, well written, but, for some reason, it doesn't catch my attention. The descriptions in the beginning are incredibly written, but they're so clustered together that ...
May 27, 2008
