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Re: Winnie (more to come)
As face it, he just wasn’t good enough well at least in his mind this was the case. What? As face it? I'm not sure that makes sense. And you ...
Oct 6, 2006 -
Re: Candy Ville
That's really pretty good. Few things: 1. REALLY short. You may want to stretch it out. Like what happened on the way to the library, or what her homework was. ...
Oct 6, 2006 -
Re: Should I continue/ start to write this story??
I really like it. It will leave everyone in suspense. As the other who commented, it's been done before, but maybe you can add a twist at the end, like ...
Apr 18, 2006 -
Re: Mirrors that kill.
Okay, I like the style of this, but I can't really tell you much until I can read some more of the story. What is she running from? Is he ...
Mar 12, 2006 -
Re: I don't think this can have a title-any suggestions?
I think it should have a name that represents where she lives. :D The third sentence was a little screwy, I agree, but the last line was brillance! Great job! ...
Feb 18, 2006 -
Re: My Life = Complicated
Well, I'm new at this, but if that got published, I'd buy it! Nice job! :D -Dani :P
Feb 9, 2006 -
Re: Intellectual Barbie
Okay...this may not be the greatest, but constructive critisism is very much appreciated. Thank you. :D The light from the screen and the clock blinking form 1:02 to 1:03 were ...
Jan 21, 2006