pandapez

Hi there! First off, welcome to YWS! Just so you know, your supposed to do two reviews for every one of your own posts. But, that technicality aside, let's see ...

Hi ^_^ Here's what I noticed: Nitpicks: First: It hung just short of the center of the clear blue sky, awakening Ward Four their slumber You forgot to add 'from' ...

Frist off, wow. This was really amazing. I loved you descriptions. But like Cat_910 said, it was kinda short so this isn't going to be most detailed of reviews. First: ...

Hello! litte tin fish covered most of what I saw, so I really only have one thing to add: “Rosa, let’s making a deal. She can stayed up and listens ...

Hi again! First off, I think you did another great job. There were only a few things I noticed and most of those were talked about GryphonFledgling so sorry if ...

Hi! Good job on this. I really liked it^^ The few things I noticed: Her mom fussed, shrill, overbearing voice coming out of the phone in annoying bursts You forgot ...

Wow. I really liked this piece^^ I think you did a great job, so this isn't going much of a criticism sorry. Anyway, on to what I did notice: It ...

Hi! OK, here are some things I noticed: With their mission completed, the two SAS men decided to look around, what they found in the base had led to a ...

Well, I thought I'd do this in the cookie pattern thing (I really can't remember it's exact name right now, but it's the good-bad-good form of criticism. You know the ...