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Okay, nitpicks first. :smt002 The bag of onion rings seemed to just fall out of my hands as my fingers sloppily moved around the key board. As I continued my ...

First off, I want you to know that I love your avatar. I am a ninja, and have the utmost respect for others. Now to the review. While the writing ...

Hi, again. I loved it, no surprise to me. I think the same thing I said in my last review will go for here, too. So, I'm not going to ...

I liked the plot a lot. DO NOT GIVE UP. That is not a request! I really want to know what happens next, and I am planning on reading chapter ...

I like it. I like it a lot. I don't think anything needs to be changed. It's very descriptive, but at the same time, kind of vague. It could happen ...

You've got talent, that's for sure, but I was really confused. I saw in the post menu where you said it was a metaphorical journey through high school, and that ...

I liked your story. It was very intriguing and left me wanting to read more. There were a few mistakes with grammar an such, i.e. missing commas, run-on sentences, missing ...

Okay. Overall, I really enjoyed your story. It has a nice plot and now I want to know what happens next. But there are a few mistakes. Your grammar needs ...

Hey, moonstar! :wink: I really like your poem. It has so much depth, and it really makes you think about life and death and all that jazz. Other than a ...

Wow. That was amazing! I loved it. You should really consider publishing it. I was immediately wrapped up in the story and now I want to read more! You make ...

Howdy! :D I really liked your story; it was interesting and left me wanting more! I liked your story, but was confused like the other reviewers. I have faith in ...

That was amazing. I want to read more! You made the President such a lively character that I can picture every description of him. I like how you described the ...