orion625

I love that you added a twist near the end of the poem about how we contextualize nature and reality in the modern world (the camera). I also enjoyed the ...

I really enjoy the surprise ending of this piece. The action and pacing are excellent. One suggestion I would offer is to add more sensory details to your description. What ...

This is a really powerful poem. I like the way that slowly the meaning behind the poem is unveiled through biblical references and subtly clues. Technically, the poem has a ...

This poetry has a very unique and at times unclear rhyme scheme. The choice of line breaks successfully add depth and rhythmic interest to this piece (planted my/haunted feet). I'm ...

This is an interesting poem. I like the incorporation of a classical children’s fairytale into the plot. It acts as an excellent metaphor, through which a darker story can be ...

This is an excellent poem, in a sense. Self-aware of it's cheesiness and the horrors it presents to the lactose intolerant, a truly revolutionary piece in the movement of cheese ...