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Awh that means a lot! :) Thanks for the comment, I hoped your review helped your team win :)

Thanks Griff! I really appreciate this. Unfortunately since I posted this - nearly a year ago - I've re-written this whole chapter and in the process of doing it to ...

Thank you Jordin I appreciate your comments. However I must point out again that I never wrote that Harley was a girl. When you said this in the first chapter ...

Thank you Ray! :) I'm not sure about needing to use quotation marks. I actually just went and raided my bookshelf, but you seem right *grins sheepishly* :) I'm going ...

Now I don't feel like I'm doing Lei's past justice by writing that short paragraph D: haha Olivia & Lei fall madly in love except he keeps a big part ...

"I think it might also be interesting if maybe something happened to Lei when he was away from Claire that made him act like this and build this wall up. ...

And wow! No wonder it was so long! Thanks for the hint Bec! That would have seemed very daunting D: haha

Thank you! That was very helpful :) Reading over it now I don't think what Claire thinks about Lei lines up with his character. In the beginning I had a ...

Its cool, if it needs work it needs work :) but something that I could work on would be good :) Like what area's need work?

This is really interesting :D I love zombie stories :) There were only a few things that I found wrong, but mostly just you left some words out in sentences. ...

That was really interesting :) I like it :) And the end is a mystery about his daily ritual so I want to read the next chapter :) Just a ...

that's cool :) Thank you for your interest anyway :)

Is it too much about the horses? I've been trying to cut down on it as it may be boring. The riding lesson is a lot shorter than it was ...

This sounds very intriguing. It makes me wonder what's going to happen :) "A choice that in my case, can decided the fate of the universe." - I think you ...